[비지니스 이메일 영어] 발주 프로그램 견적비교 관련

내가 쓴거 영어로 고쳐달라고 했더니 진짜 멋진 문장을 만들어냄....

정말 영어는 어디까지 공부해야하는걸까 ㅠ

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상황설명

우리 해외거래처 L사에서 앞으로 발주 프로그램을 통해 발주해줄것을 요청해옴

우리는 가구쪽이라 원래는 도면이나 발주서를 PDF로 보내서 발주하던 형식이었는데

이제 W, K, C 3개의 외주 프로그램 업체 시스템으로 직접 발주가 가능

 

그래서 W, K, C 에 각각 연락해서 견적을 받고 검토해야하는 상황

우리 해외거래처 L사는 W프로그램을 추천하는 상황이라 금액은 먼저 받았음

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[내가 쓴 메일]

Dear S,

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From this year we want to start planning software and it will be most likely W from company A.

But for getting approval of internally we need to compare W, K and C in an aspect of price and benefit when we're using them.

If I contact direct to them, K and C company might eager to make us to using their program and sales.

So if possible I would like to receive their price information from you if your company have received any of information of them.

Pls advice, and if it's inevitable I will contact to them directly.

Thanks!

 

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[Chap GPT가 교처준 메일]

 

Dear S,

Starting this year, we are considering the implementation of planning software, with W from A company being our preferred choice. 

However, before seeking internal approval, we aim to conduct a comprehensive comparison of W, K, and C in terms of both price and benefits.

To facilitate this process, I am reaching out to inquire whether your company has received any pricing information from W, K, or C. 

For w, we already received price info.

Obtaining this information will greatly assist us in making an informed decision.
I am aware that reaching out directly to these software providers may result in them promoting their programs aggressively. 

Therefore, if your company has any information on their pricing, I would appreciate it if you could share it with us. 

Your advice on the matter would be invaluable.

In the event that we are unable to obtain the required details through this channel, I will proceed to contact them directly. 

Thank you in advance for your assistance and prompt response.

 

 

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주요표현

1) implementation of planning software : 설계 프로그램 구현

 

im·ple·ment
동사
1. 타동사 [VN] 시행하다
to implement changes/decisions/policies/reforms  변화/결정/정책/개혁을 시행하다
유의어 carry out

명사
1. (흔히 옥외 활동에 쓰이는 간단한) 도구[기구]
agricultural implements 농기구

 

2)  conduct a comprehensive comparison of A,B

A와 B를 종합적으로 비교하다